Kia Ora Melemanu, Kiana-Marino here from the Summer Learning Journey.
Tino pai tēnei hei timatanga! This is a very good start! Thank you for participating in the haiku activity and for sharing you haiku with us on your blog. You have chosen a great photo as your background for your haiku.
Poetry doesn’t actually have rules and lots of poets have played with the rules of haikus. But the limitations can help us have to think creatively to say what we want in as few words as we can. I think what you've done is really good but I reckon for an extra challenge you could try working on this one again and work in that 5,7,5 syllable and see what creativity comes out of having to work to the limitations.
Kia Ora Melemanu, Kiana-Marino here from the Summer Learning Journey.
ReplyDeleteTino pai tēnei hei timatanga! This is a very good start! Thank you for participating in the haiku activity and for sharing you haiku with us on your blog. You have chosen a great photo as your background for your haiku.
Poetry doesn’t actually have rules and lots of poets have played with the rules of haikus. But the limitations can help us have to think creatively to say what we want in as few words as we can. I think what you've done is really good but I reckon for an extra challenge you could try working on this one again and work in that 5,7,5 syllable and see what creativity comes out of having to work to the limitations.
I’ll be really excited to see if you do,
Ngā mihi
Kiana-Marino