My writing sample

One early morning  I was Pulling my Curtin open it the motel and I was looking up to the sky.

They were ear balloons flying up in the air. and they were Colourful balloons. They were pink

blue , yellow, green and black and so after I was pulling my curtain open I opened my Window

and looked at the ear balloons so after I was doing my window my mum said that we will be going

on one so I said I will be going on the pink and blue ear balloon

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And so I went inside to get pint, paper and pen and so I was drawing the balloons in the ear and 

after I was drawing I put my paper on to the Table and when I came back outside the balloons were

flying up in the sky

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And when I was still outside the balloons was up in the ear and when I  was looking away the balloons

were popped 

So when I was looking I was Surprise.